workshop reflection annotated bibliography

The advice my group gave me was:

·         Abby said that I needed to focus on my citations and make sure they were done correctly by the time they needed to be turned in. She also mentioned that I should go through the papers one more time and look for grammar errors.

·         Pricilla mentioned that the annotated bib for my source, ‘on the commons’, still needed the most work and I should really focus on editing that one to make it flow better. She said I should “take some out and put some in”

·         Andrew realized that after going through all of my annotated bibs that he had a source that would be helpful to me and recommended that I read ‘Failure of the American Schools’ by Klein              

The most helpful piece of advice I received was how to properly format MLA and set up the top left corner with the name, class, title etc. That was helpful because not only had I not done it properly, I was confused on the order and how to.

It is hard to say what the least helpful piece of advice I received was. Everything that anyone pointed out I needed and helped guide me to a better final draft.

My plans for revision are to focus on my MLA formatting, look over the ‘on the commons’ source and look for the Failure in the American Schools by Klein.