The most helpful piece of advice I received was that I wasn’t
fully analyzing, rather re summering. I also hadn’t realized I didn’t submit my
5th annotated bibliography.
The least helpful piece of advice I received, as always were
punctuation errors. Not to say that punctuation isn’t important.
Hopefully my question will be answered once you look at the
2nd submission of these annotated bibs but I want to make sure that I
am fully analyzing these instead of just stating my opinion on them.
My plans for revision consist of scratching my entire analysis
paragraph and re doing them from scratch. I sat down using Megan’s comments and
tried to find the strong and weak argument points, the holes I found and the
questions I was left with. It also involved me sitting back down with all 5 of
my sources and going through them again.
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